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RFTS Vol.01 The Beginning 004

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Genres: Shoujo, Comedy, School, Romance, Ecchi.

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Reaching for the Sky comics:

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:bulletblue:RFTS Vol.01 - The Beginning
:bulletblue:RFTS Vol.02 - Micca's Curse
:bulletblue:RFTS Vol.03 - What it feels like
:bulletblue:RFTS Vol.04 - My lost past
:bulletblue:RFTS Vol.05 - Thinking about you
:bulletblue:RFTS - Katrina's Doujin
:bulletblue:RFTS Kian's Album
:bulletblue:Micca's Compilation 2011
:bulletblue:REACHING FOR THE SKY ARTBOOK
:bulletpurple:COMMISSION A day in Micca's life
:bulletpurple:COMMISSION Play With me
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Why did he show her his face? If he didn't want to kill her or give the cops any leads as to his identity, he should have just kept his helmet on and his face hidden, he still could have given her the same instructions to follow, but regardless of whether she did as he told or not, she wouldn't have been able to describe his face to the authorities. Revealing himself like this is either setting her up to be killed or setting himself up to be found out later, either way isn't a very smart move, especially if he's serious about not wanting to hurt her (which he ultimately does sadly). As an ecchi/romance/comedy comic, this could have worked if it had been treated more lightheartedly, instead of the grim dark scene we see playing out here.