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Kian x Katrina II

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**15 min sketch**

omg! it's been like a week since i have drawn anything!

:star: about commissions i owe: don;t worry tomorrow it's my last time in school! so im going to draw this hole weekend yay for that!

:star: about RFTS: more pages coming soon!!

and for the comments... i'll answer all of them soon too!(i hope >_< )

love ya guys!! ~:heart: hope you like it, this is a part of RFTS (:star:) <-- yay for stars!

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Kian (c) =NeKoChAnK

Katrina (c) =NeKoChAnK

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WARNING

Please Respect my gallery
if you don't like it ... don't look at!
Constructive critics are welcome


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EmerysMallor's avatar
:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

I really like this piece. I think its going in the right direction but does lack a sense of perfect structure. Perfection is not always the best thing, but in this case they are small details of anatomy and body structure. Those tend to be noticeable, things like: the guy's torso (length is off); The girl's arm (shoulder seems off); the guy's jaw line. I also notice issues over the shadowing but they may be there for transition of you lighting effect. I think it would be easily fixed with more contrast between the shadows. All these thing are small details and obviously you have much skill. I hope to see your art become the perfect reflection of your intent and dreams.